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squeakfreek
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Quick Critiques Nov 24, 2024 17:01:54 GMT -5

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Post by squeakfreek on Nov 24, 2024 17:01:54 GMT -5

Hello, I'm creating this thread for quick WIP critiques :3
This is a squeak I'm working on for a friend, I think it's coming along okay but feels a bit off for reasons I can't put my finger on. Any advice is appreciated, also don't be afraid to share what you're working on too!

the squeak shall inherit the earth...

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Quick Critiques Nov 24, 2024 18:50:59 GMT -5 squeakfreek likes this

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Post by Kit Collie on Nov 24, 2024 18:50:59 GMT -5

That's great overall, I love how you're conveying the form of the musculature!

Here's the first couple things that jumped out at me:

The legs read to me as three equally-sized straight sections, I reckon the feet would benefit from being shortened and angled forward toward the toes
The general pose suggests they're relaxed / leaning back, however the shoulders appear raised

I highly recommend snapping photos of yourself in poses you're unsure of, that'll help you spot side-by-side differences and compare proportions!

Last Edit: Nov 24, 2024 18:51:41 GMT -5 by Kit Collie

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butterball: lioness hmm. I think Arts Discussion could work yeah. I think the assumption is anything posted in Art & Illustration is art that the poster themselves has made so it would be the least confusing place to put it Nov 24, 2024 19:16:53 GMT -5

butterball: It would be fun to share art we've gotten :3 I don't get many opportunities to Nov 24, 2024 19:21:06 GMT -5

Kit Collie: FWIW I threw my daily art share thread in Art & Illustration because I figured Arts Discussion would be more about conversations about technique / business processes and such! Nov 24, 2024 19:23:05 GMT -5

Terrible Animal: i have so much art that ive gotten over the years and would love to show it off Nov 24, 2024 19:25:46 GMT -5

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